Monday, July 22, 2013

Where have our burglars gone?

The Economist: http://www.economist.com/news/briefing/21582041-rich-world-seeing-less-and-less-crime-even-face-high-unemployment-and-economic

"Oh where, oh where has my little dog gone? Oh where, oh where can he be?" This little song has been share in many families as a cute, catchy tune concerning a fictional, missing dog. However, change the word "dog" into the word "burglar", this catchy tune now reflects current world problems.

In this article, many ideas are presented that may have led to the decrease of criminal activities. It is believed that the absence of a baby-boom, the increase of prisoners, the improvement of police forces, the increase of well-behaved children, and the enlargement of business's security may have led to the decreasing of crime rates. These ideas individually have flaws but some of them may have been correct. Bill Bratton, the reformer of police tactics, has done much to make ghetto, dangerous cities safe. He, arguably, could be the one man who changed the LAPD from the racist, corrupted, scandal-ridden force in the 1990s. His actions of improving the police force are justified as one of the reasons crime rate is dropping. Another point given by the article that has decreased crime rates is the increase in well-behaved children. Children growing up in "together" families and experiencing a wonderful education are less likely to turn to crime as a means of survival later on in his or her life. Instead, these children are more likely to become excellent grown-ups and lead the society as role-models for the children in their generation.

Decreasing of crimes undoubtedly has beneficial short and long term effects. In the short term, the decrease of crime is superb. However, in some aspects, one can see the negative long term side of a gradual decrease in crime rate. First of all, the decrease in crime rates leads to the possibility of the government not needing a police force, or at least not a sufficient police force. This way of perceiving the police force may lead to an inadequate amount of money to go to the police force, forcing some police officers to be laid off. The more secure a government is about protection, the less there will be the necessity of a police officer. This misconception will lead to a gradual decline of police officer and when a time arises of many officers, the government will not be ready. Secondly, one could argue how in the long term, the decrease in crime rate can lead to more stress for children. In order for one's child to live a crime-free life, the child might face oppression from his or her parent. Constant oppression will lead a child to either rebellion, or resentment to the parents. Either way, there will not be any positive aftermaths.

4 comments:

  1. I agree that the crime rates have been going down. I also agree that this decrease in crime rates can be beneficial by reducing the cost of maintaining the poice department. However, I thought that if there are no or insufficient police officers, the crime rates would go up again. There will be a peace, but from history we know that peace does not last.

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  2. Wow! I am amazed. Your improvement in this blog is tremendous. Just a little grammatical correction, though. In the sentence where you said, "Children are growing up in "together" families..." the wording is a bit awkward. Perhaps, if you said, "Children truly growing up in a more loving, familial setting and..." it might be better, but I don't know if this version still correlates with what you were trying to say.
    Aside from that, I really admire your commentary and hook. You looked past the surface and focused on the a deeper issue. Although the decrease in crime rate may seem beneficial, it actually may spur problems in the future. Crime will always be an issue and I hope that the government will not do as you predicted and keep a strong, stable police force. Your hook was also creative :)

    Overall, you did an excellent job!

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  3. This article was very interesting. I was surprised to hear about the sharp decline in crime rates. I agree with you and James that the decrease in crime rates can lead to a reduction of the police force, which would allow crime rates to go back up. Hopefully, this will never happen.

    I agree with Rachel that you improved considerably on analyzing the article. You clearly explained the reasons why the decrease in crime rate may cause new problems even though it seems entirely advantageous. Also, I was particularly impressed by your hook, which was very clever. Other than a few grammatical errors, I cannot think of any other way you can improve your commentary.

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  4. You did a great job in analyzing and commenting you thoughts on the article. Your hook was catchy and caught my attention immediately. I was somewhat surprised to hear the crime rates are actually going down but I hope that this continues and that America can keep up this downward turn of crime rate. The only worry is with less emphasis on the police force criminals might start becoming active again because they think they won’t get caught. Overall your blog was great and has improved tremendously.

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